04-03-2014, 05:20 PM
How could we even survive something like that? Our atmosphere will get blown away
Also..
The ice caused the world's mass to change
wut?? That's some strange ice
and its trajectory changed too, sending it back to a habitable, if cold, orbit.
wut wut? So first it flew away.. but because somehow the planet got heavier because of the ice and so it fell back into an orbit closer to the star it orbits?
Also.. these name, can't you get something more original
They quarreled over the pantheon of creation (this atlantica and baltica) so atlantica sunk baltica (shouldnt it be the other way around ;'''') ) .. How? Magic? Wut? If they can't even reverse engineer an airballoon how will they sink a whole (what seems to be) a continent
and causing more international tension over the matter.
but werent they isolated from the rest of the world until they made the airships? Didnt they loose all these airships? How do they still have contact? (all of the scientists left to go and explore the rest of the world they were once isolated from by the large oceans.) (Also: as the now isolated Atlantica begins to rediscover )
And how does this work:
The gods are dead and the priests are discussing who will be the next pantheon of divine gods.
So we appoint some people? They become gods? Magic, what? Do gods come into being as soon as we say they're our gods?
Please, read it over
Also..
The ice caused the world's mass to change
wut?? That's some strange ice
and its trajectory changed too, sending it back to a habitable, if cold, orbit.
wut wut? So first it flew away.. but because somehow the planet got heavier because of the ice and so it fell back into an orbit closer to the star it orbits?
Also.. these name, can't you get something more original
They quarreled over the pantheon of creation (this atlantica and baltica) so atlantica sunk baltica (shouldnt it be the other way around ;'''') ) .. How? Magic? Wut? If they can't even reverse engineer an airballoon how will they sink a whole (what seems to be) a continent
and causing more international tension over the matter.
but werent they isolated from the rest of the world until they made the airships? Didnt they loose all these airships? How do they still have contact? (all of the scientists left to go and explore the rest of the world they were once isolated from by the large oceans.) (Also: as the now isolated Atlantica begins to rediscover )
And how does this work:
The gods are dead and the priests are discussing who will be the next pantheon of divine gods.
So we appoint some people? They become gods? Magic, what? Do gods come into being as soon as we say they're our gods?
Please, read it over