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Is this the end?
Boy! , Boy! You must wake up!
I barely could hear this man.. He just woke me up at a bad time.. I just said "Ugghhh, what?" " let me sleep."
The man wouldn't let down.. He said, Louder than before, "Boy, this isn't a joke you must wake up!"
I finally decided to open my eyes.. To me it looked like the man was right on top of me gazing into my eyes... Though when i turned around in my blanket. I noticed that he was just bending down to look at me.
I pulled my self up, trying to get a glimpse of the small ship that i was truly engulfed in.. There was just something that didn't feel right.. When I was awake yesterday.. It was pretty sunny. Now it just feels its hotter than ever..
The man said, "Pal i thought you would have never woke up. I guess i was wrong about you." Enough of my chit chat, you must see this before it is too late"
I stood up, stretching my long arms out. I looked to see that the man was already standing at the door waiting for me..
I wondered what was going on. The only thing I possibly knew is that the clouds were pretty bright.. Which seemed quite odd to me.. since usually a cloud that I would usually see around the city would resemble a dark or light colored cloud
The clouds just seemed different.
Walking to the entrance of this ship. I could tell this ship wasn't all in a great shape.. Looking around i could see cracked walls, pipes were flooding with water. paint was sheding off the interior design..
I was starting to get freaked out.. Is this what i would travel for a long time on the sea? This is starting to make me rethink this journey.Despite the weird broken things i saw.
I stepped to the entrance and looked at the man saying "So what is there that you wanted to show me?"
The man looked away from me towards the sky "Well why don't you step out to take a look?"
I stepped out of the door. to feel that the air on the outside of the boat was even hotter.
My Jaw dropped in horror..
I looked to the man.. "When did this happen?"
The man "I-I don't exactly know.. it all happened so fast."
To be continued.
Boy! , Boy! You must wake up!
I barely could hear this man.. He just woke me up at a bad time.. I just said "Ugghhh, what?" " let me sleep."
The man wouldn't let down.. He said, Louder than before, "Boy, this isn't a joke you must wake up!"
I finally decided to open my eyes.. To me it looked like the man was right on top of me gazing into my eyes... Though when i turned around in my blanket. I noticed that he was just bending down to look at me.
I pulled my self up, trying to get a glimpse of the small ship that i was truly engulfed in.. There was just something that didn't feel right.. When I was awake yesterday.. It was pretty sunny. Now it just feels its hotter than ever..
The man said, "Pal i thought you would have never woke up. I guess i was wrong about you." Enough of my chit chat, you must see this before it is too late"
I stood up, stretching my long arms out. I looked to see that the man was already standing at the door waiting for me..
I wondered what was going on. The only thing I possibly knew is that the clouds were pretty bright.. Which seemed quite odd to me.. since usually a cloud that I would usually see around the city would resemble a dark or light colored cloud
The clouds just seemed different.
Walking to the entrance of this ship. I could tell this ship wasn't all in a great shape.. Looking around i could see cracked walls, pipes were flooding with water. paint was sheding off the interior design..
I was starting to get freaked out.. Is this what i would travel for a long time on the sea? This is starting to make me rethink this journey.Despite the weird broken things i saw.
I stepped to the entrance and looked at the man saying "So what is there that you wanted to show me?"
The man looked away from me towards the sky "Well why don't you step out to take a look?"
I stepped out of the door. to feel that the air on the outside of the boat was even hotter.
My Jaw dropped in horror..
I looked to the man.. "When did this happen?"
The man "I-I don't exactly know.. it all happened so fast."
To be continued.
(This post was last modified: 01-23-2010, 12:05 AM by Mojo.)
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