My play
Good Few errors that I can't seem to find again but heres one,
JED : I really can’t wait for the Meteor shower to start . I always wanted to see it since I was a kid. Its Meteor not comet
Brad : (looks up for a split second, looks down and see smoke) We need to get off this roof!
I can't see the ones I noticed when I read through, But apart from that I liked the story line its good
JED : I really can’t wait for the Meteor shower to start . I always wanted to see it since I was a kid. Its Meteor not comet
Brad : (looks up for a split second, looks down and see smoke) We need to get off this roof!
I can't see the ones I noticed when I read through, But apart from that I liked the story line its good
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